A better version of the writing sample A [phone 343 example street locked from drones] [A dark growl echoes over the line a voice that has seen many things and a throat that has seen too much smoke] "Hello... A thought crossed my mind the other day while at my job, I was sitting at a desk moving my way through paperwork when I stopped. I looked up at those drones laughing around the water cooler living they’re hollow lives here and pretending to live. And then it struck me “They’re happier than I am” So after I got “home “I pondered this fact and saw that where my happiness had come from War When a soldier is in his trenches during war all he asks for is for the battle to finish and to go home and to they're family. But when on the battle field all a soldier believes is to fight and to win! [Snake moves his hand over the table next to the phone searching for his cigar, he finds it lights it and puts it in his mouth] After killing the boss I realised how we’re all just tools for the government they have no idea how a soldier lives or breaths, no nation I have seen accepts the common soldiers different to anyone else. If only there was a place where soldiers could be accepted as they were…." [that’s some dangerous foreshadowing there snake… Snake slips into pondering and smoking seemingly forgetting the phone is still to his ear]
B [ action|park] [snake has taken off and is observing his headband] "boss.... What would you do...?" [snake catches sight of a squirrel running through the park, he watches intently before putting his headband back on and standing up licking his lips] " I wonder how that tastes..?"
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A [phone 343 example street locked from drones]
[A dark growl echoes over the line a voice that has seen many things and a throat that has seen too much smoke]
"Hello...
A thought crossed my mind the other day while at my job, I was sitting at a desk moving my way through paperwork when I stopped. I looked up at those drones laughing around the water cooler living they’re hollow lives here and pretending to live.
And then it struck me
“They’re happier than I am”
So after I got “home “I pondered this fact and saw that where my happiness had come from
War
When a soldier is in his trenches during war all he asks for is for the battle to finish and to go home and to they're family. But when on the battle field all a soldier believes is to fight and to win!
[Snake moves his hand over the table next to the phone searching for his cigar, he finds it lights it and puts it in his mouth]
After killing the boss I realised how we’re all just tools for the government they have no idea how a soldier lives or breaths, no nation I have seen accepts the common soldiers different to anyone else. If only there was a place where soldiers could be accepted as they were…."
[that’s some dangerous foreshadowing there snake…
Snake slips into pondering and smoking seemingly forgetting the phone is still to his ear]
B [ action|park]
[snake has taken off and is observing his headband]
"boss.... What would you do...?"
[snake catches sight of a squirrel running through the park, he watches intently before putting his headband back on and standing up licking his lips]
" I wonder how that tastes..?"