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Mayfield Mods ([personal profile] mayfield_mods) wrote in [community profile] mayfield_ooc 2012-04-11 09:01 pm (UTC)

PENDING

We think Nepeta's sample and personality aren't matching what we know of her personality; while some of her main traits are there, some dimensions that we've seen to her are missing. We'd like to see another paragraph or two that goes more in depth. We're also not sure we're clear what you mean by naivety, so we'd like you to clarify that with canon examples if possible. Finally, we'd like to see an additional sample, because the provided sample doesn't seem to match Nepeta's voice. Thanks!

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