We need you to elaborate on Grell's personality, as we're not getting a sense of the character beyond surface traits. We'll need to see more in depth analysis.
In addition to that, we're confused about your idea of Grell's gender identity. It's clear you don't interpret Grell as transgender, which is your choice, but we do need you to justify your decision in a way where we feel confident that you understand the character's gender identity and we understand your reasoning. We aren't sure what you mean when you say 'Grell outwardly presents himself as male,' and we need you to elaborate. Using female pronouns and referring to oneself as female generally would generally mean that someone identifies as female, and female pronouns should be used. If you do not want to use female pronouns or identify Grell as transgender, we need you to explain what specifically in canon leads you to the conclusion that Grell is 'outwardly presenting himself as male' and gets satisfaction from claiming to be a gender 'other than what he is.'
Finally, your sample is in the third person when we required a first person sample. Please rewrite the sample in first person, formatting it like you might format a post in the game.
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In addition to that, we're confused about your idea of Grell's gender identity. It's clear you don't interpret Grell as transgender, which is your choice, but we do need you to justify your decision in a way where we feel confident that you understand the character's gender identity and we understand your reasoning. We aren't sure what you mean when you say 'Grell outwardly presents himself as male,' and we need you to elaborate. Using female pronouns and referring to oneself as female generally would generally mean that someone identifies as female, and female pronouns should be used. If you do not want to use female pronouns or identify Grell as transgender, we need you to explain what specifically in canon leads you to the conclusion that Grell is 'outwardly presenting himself as male' and gets satisfaction from claiming to be a gender 'other than what he is.'
Finally, your sample is in the third person when we required a first person sample. Please rewrite the sample in first person, formatting it like you might format a post in the game.