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Mayfield Mods ([personal profile] mayfield_mods) wrote in [community profile] mayfield_ooc 2012-01-14 02:01 am (UTC)

Pending

We are still seeing spelling and grammar errors, and the samples do not show much of Gohan. By that, I mean that I feel that a lot of what he says could be said by anyone; there isn't unique voice.

Please reply with an additional sample that would be a sample post Gohan might use in the game, and have it be entirely or almost entirely dialogue. We need to get a good sense of Gohan's voice.

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