The personality is missing some key components of Korra's personality (frustration with her inability to bend, connection to Aang's legacy, etc), and in some cases seems conflicting, particularly the third paragraph- I'm not really seeing the connection between having a crush on someone and being a "girl at heart". We'll need to see an additional three paragraphs of personality exploring these.

Also, the sample entry should be done in the style of a first-person regular post in Mayfield, not a conversation with a drone, so we'll need to see a revised sample as well. If you're having trouble coming up with one, feel free to link to other RPs, make use of testrun_box, or draw on past Mayfield events for inspiration.